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Reviews for Obvious

Seshat3 02/08/09 - 06:05PM 1: One
Nice little glimpses into Nick and Greg's thoughts, really heightening the tension! Can't wait to see them get together. I love these little tender moments, the glances, the sighing and the cuddling. Lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and liking ;-)

GrandMoffAmbrius 02/07/09 - 02:06PM 4: Chapter 3
The ending of this chapter is adorable. I love the scenes where Nick and Greg are snuggled up and holding one another. These types of scenes are often the ones where the love they have for each other is the most visable. You can tell how they draw security and warmth from each other. When Greg played with Nick's hair and he sighs, it makes you want to cry a bit. Nick's reaction to Greg's scent was beautiful. When they look at the other one while he is sleeping and thiking about how they look totaly different asleep was sweet. You wrote this scene perfectly. Hopefuly, they will relise their feelings for each other soon. An excellent job.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! I do hope that the next chapter will be the last and, who knows, maybe they'll realise their feelings? I really enjoyed writing the last scene. The image of them snuggled up on the couch is really just too cute ;-)

GrandMoffAmbrius 01/21/09 - 01:00PM 3: Three
The only complaint I have is that the chapters are so short. I know you said that you have trouble writing long chapter and that's ok. I hope one of them finaly decieds to make a move on the other. Or if one of the team decieds to do it for them. But great job. The story is great.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really try hard to write longer chapters but somehow it just doesn't work out :-( I hope Sara will play a part in bringing them together. It's weird although she's not my favourite character I still can't imagine a story without her although I've barely missed her after she left.

Yoshi 01/18/09 - 09:40AM 2: Two
These short little chapters are just perfect at building up the tension. C'mon guys - get it sorted. I really like this :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yeah, I don't seem able to write longer fics, so ... And there will be even more tension, believe me ... ;-)

GrandMoffAmbrius 01/16/09 - 11:46PM 2: Two
Nick knows that he wants Greg even if he dosen't. Come on Nick, just ask him out. Great story. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you'll like the next chapters, too ;-)

QueenOfTheUniverse 12/28/08 - 04:49PM 1: One
Oooh, this is really good so far! The short snippets really work for this. Keep up the amazing work! I wanna read more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I try to work out the next chapter and post it some time this week. Thanks so much! ;-)

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