|ChemFishee||09/29/06 - 12:25AM||8: 8 of 8Signed|
|The last scene was gorgeous. I love the imagery of them lying on the bed, holding hands and wishing they were capable of doing more. It was a gloriously human touch to this casefile. I can only wish that the writers of the show would pay attention to fic like this when they decide to incorporate personal touches in episodes.|
Author's Response: Well personal touches in the series are not always done well. Sometimes it feels like it was written by a bulldozer or something equally insensitive. I didn't want to overdo it for this fic. Subtle is what the love is anyway. /A
|Lonewolfe001||09/26/06 - 12:44PM||8: 8 of 8Signed|
|FANTASTIC STORY. i loved it, the last sentence was briliant : "Fingers caressed and touched, symbolizing what their bodies wanted to do, but couldn’t. " * squee *so touching & romantic. WELL DONE !!|
Author's Response: Thank you. I am really glad to know that you loved it. It was my first proper casefile really. And then sending them undercover is a little kink of mine.
|Lonewolfe001||09/23/06 - 12:51PM||7: 7 of 8Signed|
|Great chapter !! thank you for the wonderful mental image of nick standing naked except for his cowboy hat & boots. YUMMMY! excuse my ignorance but what does an enema kit have to do with preparing for a night out???????|
Author's Response: Ignorance excused. Some 'bottoms' like to rinse out so to speak before going out to hook with a random top. A friend of mine loved to discuss the process at great lenght whenever he didn't find somebody to hook up with.
Nick has a great body and showing it off like that was fun. My own man just stands in front of his wardrobe and asks me to dictate what he is to wear:)
|Lonewolfe001||09/22/06 - 01:10PM||6: 6 of 8Signed|
|they are going to have sex & catch the bad guys. thats a win-win situation. please update soon|
Author's Response: If all goes well then indeed it is win-win.
|shacky20||09/20/06 - 05:33PM||1: 1 of 8Signed|
|God I'm such a bad bad person. I finally got this all saved and am going to start reading it. I have so many N/G fics to read, I started "Don't Fence me In" finally, and I see another chapter is done with this, but I'm so gonna start this soon, can't wait, I love a good casefile..|
Author's Response: Don't feel bad. I'm constantly behind on reading, it seems that I have always 10 fics open in tabs waiting to be read. I hope that you find it an acceptable casefile.
|Genesis Acadia||09/20/06 - 02:59PM||6: 6 of 8Signed|
|I'm really enjoying this story. Its very alive and flows well. Your characters are very endearing, which makes for an enjoyable read despite such a dark topic.
Though I must say, Nicky's little interview there sounds like it must have been extremely awkward. "How EXACTLY will you be having sex with this man? All right, well, where EXACTLY will you be touching him? Ok, demonstration time." Hehe, sounds a little embarrassing.|
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. I am quite sure having to break down something passionate into a script would be hard for any beginners. Besides Nick caught in a moment like that looks unbelievable cute.
|Lonewolfe001||09/19/06 - 12:48PM||5: 5 of 8Signed|
|i am confused. if there were 2 shots, does that mean Greg got hit. and before Vartnan got shot why did Greg assume that they were going to have sex. weren't they going to go to the club & PRETEND to have sex in the hotel. sorry i must be slow cos i just do not get it. |
Author's Response: The plan was for Vartann and Greg to go undercover and engage in having sex. As for the number of shots being fired; the kid gets off one shot at Vartann and Catherine gets 2 shots off at the kid. I hope that cleared things up for you. I didn't mean to confuse anybody.
|robinyj69||09/19/06 - 10:40AM||5: 5 of 8Signed|
|More, more, please more!!!!! I love it!!!! I love how NIck and Greg will have to go undercover now, and I love the real social matters you're discussing and the beautiful build up. It's all great!!! I can't wait for more!!!|
Author's Response: Coming!
I was trying to aim for a casefile, make it run a bit like an episode and that calls for discussing social matters. I'm really glad that you are enjoying it.
|ChemFishee||09/17/06 - 10:47AM||4: 4 of 8Signed|
|I finally got a chance to leave the promised review. I really like the episodic quality of this fic. It feels like the vintage eps, where there were only the faintest hints of lives outside of work. And the scene between Grissom and Greg just crackles. I'm looking forward to more.|
Author's Response: Vintage ep!!!! I'm so happy that it do come off as an epsiode. I wanted it to be a proper casefile with added smut. Greg has his way with Grissom, he can pretty much ask anything and also press his opinion forward when need be. And more shall come.
|Lonewolfe001||09/17/06 - 06:36AM||4: 4 of 8Signed|
|Hodges is such a jerk sometimes. I loved how Greg stood upto Grissom. please update soon|
Author's Response: Yes Hodges can be quite hard to deal with, but I'm pretty sur that it was the low public value that led him astray here. Greg will stand up for what he believe.
|Lonewolfe001||09/15/06 - 02:37PM||3: 3 of 8Signed|
|nicky is so cute. i wish greg could have been there when nick interviewed ginny. sooooo when are these two going to hook up or at least be in the same room together????????? pls update soon.|
Author's Response: Well this is constucted as a casefile and that means not so much interaction for the boys. But fear not there will be more scenes of them together in the next chapters.
|Lonewolfe001||09/14/06 - 12:26PM||2: 2 of 8Signed|
|please continue. its a very interesting fic. I never thought Detective V was gay. |
Author's Response: Thank you. Vartann does have a certain gay vibe, especially in "Iced". But I could see him paired with Sara as well. I absolutely adore his character, but don't worry The Love is still strong. The fic is all written, the last chapters just need a final run through, so it should all be posted in the very near future.
|kennedy||09/12/06 - 11:01AM||1: 1 of 8Signed|
|Ooh, looking forward to where this is going, and how the boys get together.|
Author's Response: Glad to hear that. Don't worry about the boys. They'll get theirs eventually;)
|shamelessOne||09/11/06 - 04:50PM||1: 1 of 8Signed|
|I'm so completely in love with this so far. Including Vartann just made it spike, because he's my favorite detectives. He's also very obviously gay. I love how he loves that Greg knows what a twink is. Hee. Great chapter, hope you update real soon.|
Author's Response: Thank you. Vartann is my absolute favourite as well. He's suave, cool and good with sarcastic comments. I think that he admires our two favourite CSIs as much as the rest of us. Next chapter soon to be posted.
|Lonewolfe001||09/11/06 - 12:14PM||1: 1 of 8Signed|
|That was a great first chapter. please update soon|
Author's Response: Thank you. Next update soon to come. The fic is all done so it's just me and my beta having a last go over before posting.
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